Detail Sentence

At Kawau island for our activities Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach supporting us well climbing up safely on the large brown wood on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course which taught us how to keep us safe.

Controlling the optimus boat sail I was nervous about sailing on camp.

I was nervous about sailing out of the beach on camp.

I was nervous about sailing on camp which was very difficult .

Brendon was our coach when We went abseiling.

We went and to a view of where we're climbing for abseiling.

We went abseiling I was scared and nervous .

Maui's Fish

Did you know how Aotearoa was made listen to this when Maui was so hot he was thinking of       going out fishing. Maui paddled and paddled all night.

and even  went up to morning when he had stop paddling he breezed in and out  Maui grabbed out his grandmother’s jawbone and chucked it to the deep side it went so deep. He waited and waited for a while  he had read the newspaper and had a nap.

There was a black shadow in the water soon the boat had started moving         

he pulled  and pulled as hard as  he can the water was turning black he said a karakia to make the ika lighter the fish was coming lighter and lighter  and the fish had came out of the water and it was a very big fish. Maui was so surprised.

Kawau Island

Next week we be going on a camp to kawau  Island we can't wait to go it will be so fun.
Every body will have fun at kawau  Island.
 Sports,Fishing,Kayaking, Fitness Trail,

The Whisper

When I was by our farm house I was just feeding the animal’s

when I was about go inside I heard voice. That’s saying “follow

me follow me” I was feeling a bit scared. I thought it was a ghost I

ran inside to tell my big sister Bella I told her that “When I was feeding

the animal’s and when I came inside that’s when I heard the voice

It said “follow me” I'm scared now. We went outside to check if

voice was still there Bella went to stand in farm she heard it too.

When dad and mum came back from pak n save we told them that we kept on

hearing a voice that saying “follow me”. But mum and dad didn't believe us

we kept pleading to them to go and stand in the farmhouse and you believe us. I and told dad the whole story when I went out.I was just feeding the animal’s when I was about go inside I heard voice. That’s saying “follow me”

when dad and mum went to the farm and check they said there’s “no voice”

said dad

The next day dad woke up and went outside feed the animals and when he  was going inside he heard the voice “follow me” “follow me”. Dad raced inside and told mum and the kid’s he said “it’s true” mum said “what’s

true” the voice that voice was Bella was talking about. Dad went and call

the ghost hearer so the ghost hearer came over and hear if he can hear anything. He said there was murder around this place  and murder is a man.

So the ghost hearer said we should follow it. So we all follow it

I was getting really scared so the ghost hearer said to” go away go away”

so the next day I went outside and feed the animals I stayed there for 10

second when ten second was over I ran inside and said to dad it’s gone

yes!! “it’s gone”. So mum and dad was so happy.

Rousie

Muai And the Sun

Here's the site to see it betterhttps://docs.google.com/a/ptengland.school.nz/document/d/1mblsUQdPqqZYazYwiUXB45Mow8Vtwa5fs6HFnG_Sm8g/edit

The Boy Who Cried Wolf

Here's the link to the site  to my score.



https://docs.google.com/a/ptengland.school.nz/document/d/1KHjLEogVJqTLFIWUpxrnht0OFSheA7CoXRFrFSiZp34/edit

Being Kind to Others

This video is about how much I love my mum and dad
I am kind to them and they are kind to me.
I was reading this story  called Androcles and the Lion which showed Aesop's lesson to be kind to others.

The Cross Country

Cross country has arrived there are four teams that are in the colours are Te Awa, Mataatua, Tainui,

Takitimu.

There were lots of puddle that had mud on them I saw lot of people that had fell into it. There was a huge one that I ran on and I got wet.

When I was out of energy  I kept on running so hard.  so kept on running on mud. So I ran on this very big puddle and it got me wet. and I kept on going so I was nearly there.

I been training for months and cross country on. I was sitting in the sun getting ready to go for my run when we were up. I was so nervous that I might slip through muddy puddle.

I was so puffing when I got to the finished.  It took me like 3 hours  to get to the finished line.

Three Little Pigs

Once upon a time there were three little pigs. They were grown up and had to leave  their parents they said  “good bye”.

The first little pig bought a bunch of hay and made him a house of hay. Then the wolf came by and smelled bacon and said “little pig little pig let me in” but little pig said “Not by the hairs on my

chinny chin chin”. “Then I will huff and I'll puff” and he blew his house down and ate him up “then he said that was yummy”.

       

The second little pig bought him some sticks and build himself a house of sticks he thought he was smarter but the wolf came by and smelled some ham and said blew his house down and ate him up “then he said that was tasty”.

Rhyming Words.

I like going to the library to look.

For the kind of my  favorite book.

This man named Brown.

Came back  with a bigger crown.

This man had a parrot.

And his favorite lunch was carrot.

Sentence Mashup

WALT: Rearrange the words in a sentences.

. Ring me if you have you a problem .

If you have a problem ring me.

. I'd like to know why her holiday does not spend she in France .

I know why she does not spend her time in France

They told him that wanted to play they tennis .

We asked him if he wanted to play tennis with us.

He was reading the paper while she in the garden was working) .

I was reading a paper while she was working in the garden.

Rock paper Scissors

When I was versing  Calvin  we had a draw I thought I was going to lose because I think Calvin was better then me but we had a draw.

Maori Colours

Karaka - Orange Kowhai - Yellow Poroporo - Purple Kakariki - Green Kahurangi - Blue `

My Weekend

On the weekend It was fun riding on a horse. My uncle took me and my cousin.

There were five of them one was white and the rest was brown I was riding on the white one we all have to take turns.I felt that I was going to fall of because the horse was moving too much

I  wanted to come off because that was my first time riding on a horse.

When I was finished having my turn. I helped my uncle feed the brown horses it felt funny feeding them some of us had lots of turns because it was fun so we saw my aunt brought    

us each drinks

After that we  raided the horse so I nearly fell because I was coming last. So I told my uncle “I want to come off this horse” so he told me to just hold tight I was very scared so I just jump

off they were laughing at me

So they told me to just watch them play I felt tired so I told them that I am going to buy us something to eat. So I went and bought three pie a three drinks.

Adding detail to the end the sentenes

walt add detail to the end of sentenses

`Children had to stay inside at lunchtime on friday because it was raining very hard

My hungry tummy is rumbling and I had no breakfast.

Akiko works in a sushi bar where people buy some of her yummy sushi.

Food Chain

Chris Food Chain from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

I have been showing a food chain in Antarctica from Chris, Cezar, Bailee

Ernest Shacacklton

Christopher Ernest Shackacklton from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

I have been learning about Ernest Shackleton was exploring at Antarctica he made a big hut and tried to make it to north pole. But he didn’t make it they had to turn back because it was too cold.

Quiz all about seals

Antarctic Whale's

In Antarctica whales are not fish,. They are mammals that can be found in oceans all over the word.

Whales are in groups that is  called a pods.The male whale is called bull,a female is called a cow,and the baby whale are called baby calf.

A whale's mouth is enormous, and have lots of thick  blubber, to keep them warm

Some whales have no teeth that called baleen, and some whale’s that has no teeth are called

pegs

Nga Manawa

I have made a wordle from the important words in an article I read about Mangroves (Nga Manawa).

FiaFia

I am in the hip hop I have two tutor’s is Mrs Bark’s and Miss Erasmus. Our moves will be dancing  and step to step.  Fiafia is next thursday night,all the culture groups will be performing their items,it’s going to be exciting.

The clothes I am going where a black and white clothes.

listen to ‘Christopher ’ on Audioboo

Chris Omaru Creek Testing Turbidity

Testing Omaru Creek for -Turbidity

I am going to find out the  Turbidity of Omaru creek.

I am going to test this by getting some samples from Omaru creek

Resources and equipment by using 4 water sample that is bridge,culvert,sea water and tap

I predict that: the tap water be the  will be the cleanest one.

I think this because to keep the creek clean.

Results of my tests

Sea Water	12
Tap water	12
Omaru Creek water by culvert	24
Omaru Creek water by bridge	24

My conclusion (what I found out): the bridge was the dirtiest one out of all of them.

Why I think this is: the is the dirtiest one because the plants are making it dirty.

Korobeau and Chris Omaru Creek testing

Testing Omaru Creek for -  Smell

I am going to find out: What smell is in the Omaru Creek water.

I am going to test this by: Getting samples of the water

Resources and equipment: we need to get a bucket and string,

4 jars to the other samples.

I predict that: The smell by the culvert will smell musty and  the water by the bridge it will smell funky.

I think this because: every time I go to Omaru creek it looks like it will smell

funky

Results of my tests

Sea Water	Salty
Tap water	fresh
Omaru Creek water by culvert	Playdough
Omaru Creek water by bridge	Mudy

My conclusion (what I found out): I found out that the omaru creek was not at all it looked clean.

Why I think this is: Because I smelt it and it was sweet.

Year 5\6 Camp Concert

The Force from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

It was the year 5\6 concert there were parent's when our group got called
I didn't know. I was so nervous to show the audience and so I gave it my best
shot.

School Camp 2013

Kayak1 from Team 3 PES on Vimeo.This morning it was the first day of camp the first game we played was called top town it was amazing we won against the band. After we won, we had lunch and then we walked down to reserve and met Mr Burt for kayaking it was cool and fun. What a great day we had.

Testing

When I did my e -astle test I was nervous because I think I was going to do this wrong.
How I started I was reading all the questions. It was kind of hard for some the words.
To read but some were easy to read. But I kept trying to read all  the questions.
But did this hard one that I can’t do.


When I was close to being finished I had to check it just in case some of it might be wrong.
but I checked this other one it was wrong so I fixed it up  finally I was finished . relaxed and cool

Camp Introduction Paragraghs