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At Kawau island for our activities Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach supporting us well climbing up safely on the large brown wood on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course which taught us how to keep us safe.

Controlling the optimus boat sail I was nervous about sailing on camp.

I was nervous about sailing out of the beach on camp.

I was nervous about sailing on camp which was very difficult .

Brendon was our coach when We went abseiling.

We went and to a view of where we're climbing for abseiling.

We went abseiling I was scared and nervous .

Maui's Fish

Did you know how Aotearoa was made listen to this when Maui was so hot he was thinking of       going out fishing. Maui paddled and paddled all night.

and even  went up to morning when he had stop paddling he breezed in and out  Maui grabbed out his grandmother’s jawbone and chucked it to the deep side it went so deep. He waited and waited for a while  he had read the newspaper and had a nap.

There was a black shadow in the water soon the boat had started moving         

he pulled  and pulled as hard as  he can the water was turning black he said a karakia to make the ika lighter the fish was coming lighter and lighter  and the fish had came out of the water and it was a very big fish. Maui was so surprised.

Kawau Island

Next week we be going on a camp to kawau  Island we can't wait to go it will be so fun.
Every body will have fun at kawau  Island.
 Sports,Fishing,Kayaking, Fitness Trail,

The Whisper

When I was by our farm house I was just feeding the animal’s

when I was about go inside I heard voice. That’s saying “follow

me follow me” I was feeling a bit scared. I thought it was a ghost I

ran inside to tell my big sister Bella I told her that “When I was feeding

the animal’s and when I came inside that’s when I heard the voice

It said “follow me” I'm scared now. We went outside to check if

voice was still there Bella went to stand in farm she heard it too.

When dad and mum came back from pak n save we told them that we kept on

hearing a voice that saying “follow me”. But mum and dad didn't believe us

we kept pleading to them to go and stand in the farmhouse and you believe us. I and told dad the whole story when I went out.I was just feeding the animal’s when I was about go inside I heard voice. That’s saying “follow me”

when dad and mum went to the farm and check they said there’s “no voice”

said dad

The next day dad woke up and went outside feed the animals and when he  was going inside he heard the voice “follow me” “follow me”. Dad raced inside and told mum and the kid’s he said “it’s true” mum said “what’s

true” the voice that voice was Bella was talking about. Dad went and call

the ghost hearer so the ghost hearer came over and hear if he can hear anything. He said there was murder around this place  and murder is a man.

So the ghost hearer said we should follow it. So we all follow it

I was getting really scared so the ghost hearer said to” go away go away”

so the next day I went outside and feed the animals I stayed there for 10

second when ten second was over I ran inside and said to dad it’s gone

yes!! “it’s gone”. So mum and dad was so happy.

Rousie

Muai And the Sun

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